I concur with OhBrightBlack. ;D

Oh wow! I saw the first page in the DD gallery, and was curious, I didn't expect to get as reeled in as I did! I love it's abstract-ness. Beautiful work! I look forward to its continuation

this is really insightful and I really enjoy it. Good job and I really hope you continue. The colors are amazing as well!!

These are really great.

I love this comic, the story is wonderfully thought out and put together. The imagery and style are simply beautiful, both the drama, silema and sometimes comedy very real. I would suggest, in way of improvment, to include less naration, which tends to be rather annoying and over-the-top at times, a common mistake of many comics. Leaving some papes wordless would greatly bennefit the story, as I believe that it could better be understood by the imagery on its own-visual storytelling. There are times where the dialogue and text do help, such as pages 1, 10, 12, 15, and 19-21, but at other times I think the story could be much more meaningful with no dialogue and only story through imagery, where the text could be removed such as: all other pages and pages 14, 17 and 18 especially where the images tell the story. I'm ranting and repetetive here, but it is only because how much I love both the story and artwork.